Observing from within the darkened living room,
Your grandmother is treated to a pantomime
Of youthful bliss: mason jar, dusk, eager child.
It’s early evening, and the tree frogs raise their voices
In divine song, thrumming a rhythm that you
Dance to as you chase the emerald glow of the fireflies.
And now it’s just the land and the gathering gloom
And the song and the lights and you,
A celestial concerto you feel in your bones.
The quality of the performance is such that
All illusion of separation falls away -
You and the world are one.
One bold lightning bug alights on your wrist
And you jiggle your arm, testing its temerity.
It stays. You can feel it still.
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Again this week I decided to try folding a number of prompts into one poem. It’s a great challenge! So, this was written for Poets United (prompt: nighttime); Poetic Bloomings (prompt: animal, vegetable or mineral – I chose firefly); The Sunday Whirl (prompt wordle words used: emerald, celestial, bones, rhythm, divine, illusion, pantomime, observe) and Three Word Wednesday (prompt words: early, jiggle, quality).



I very much enjoyed this poem. I read it three times, and it improved with each.
This poem is grounded strongly in place. I loved every inch of it.
You used the wordle neatly. love the idea of lightning bug “temerity”
Beautiful! It reminded me of childhood firefly chasing.
You have set us beautifully in younger days, whether we know of lightning bugs or not. And, your structure complements the content. David is right, it rereads well.
margo
This is magical, and so wonderful to read. I can see the scene, and feel the depth of the memory. Wonderful writing!
Beautiful, YOU pulled it off….I love the magic of this place you created~
very nice, feel the bug too.
Exquisite. Nature is the most beautiful presence on earth.
A feel a pastoral quality to this piece.
This leaves an echo in my heart. Saw my first lightning bugs all year the other night and was captivated. Back home, they were swarming our back yard. This was simply bliss. Thanks, and thx again for stopping by my blog! Amy
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