So very many things
In this fractured world connive
To come between us, love.
It’s hard to keep the white noise
Of busyness and distraction
From thickening around us.
But tonight I watched your trousers
Tumbling with my t-shirts.
Now embracing,
Now parting,
Now meeting again.
And can there be less hope
For us than for our laundry?
What was soiled becomes clean.
The pretense of separation vanishes.
Return again, to me.
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perfection.
i love the laundry embracing and parting and meeting again.
bringing sensousness into the everyday and finding hope there.
thanks for sharing!
Absolutely stunning! I am agog with wonder at how you turned the perfectly ordinary into something passionate… this is like the man on safari stuck up a tree with a lion pacing below enjoying the beautiful view. Seeing hope where often people would see none. Love it!
You use a great analogy here. Marvellous.
Wonderfully done!
I really liked it!
blowing over that mug of coffee
I like how you’ve weaved this like a tale and with such a great premise. I liked this ready very much.
I LOVE the first 2/3 of this poem! Very strong metaphor!
“But tonight I watched your trousers
Tumbling with my t-shirts.
Now embracing,
Now parting,
Now meeting again.”
Absolute magic.
Now that was creative! Bravo
Very nicely done – love the combination of prompts which you’ve written into a stunning observation of life!
Great combinations.
Hello This Girl Remembers~ Your poem is terrific. I love your analogy between laundry/ separation. Embracing, parting and meeting again shades this relationship with hope. Well done. Have a great day.
Ah, yes, I’ve had these thoughts before while watching the laundry. Well done!
Great poetry ~ I really like the analogy you used. Very creative.
A fracture in the time loop of our now