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We were hardly more than children
That morning when we crept
Out of camp before the dawn
To walk along the lakeshore,
Faces lifted toward the sky
As the Perseids fell shining
Across the inky expanse above.
We didn’t touch, quite,
But I could feel your warmth
Close beside me as we
Leaned out over the bridge,
Laughing as we dropped pebbles
That disturbed the still surface
Of the dark water below.
Later we found a broken rock,
Its two halves joining perfectly
To create a rounded whole.
You said that maybe it was once
An ancient mountain’s very crest
That had crumbled to the shore,
And each holding half we said we’d
Keep them to remind us of that night.
When camp was over I went to
Your room to say goodbye
But you were gone already,
The room stripped bare but for
A single rock left lonesome on the desk.
Your roommate asked me why
The tears were in my eyes
But what could I have said?
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Three Word Wednesday prompt: bridge, disturbed, still


Oh man, heartbreaking
Simply heartbreaking.
But yes, what could you have said?
Yes, I do believe I have been there,leaning over the water with someone I could have cared about.
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I am adding you to my favorites.
And he left the rock. Oh, the heartache of being 14. This is really beautiful.
Well done!
Oh, how sad – well written piece about early heartbreak.
The first of many hard lessons about life and love! Beautifully written!
oh how very sweet-sad…thank you. Enjoyed it much.
Beautiful. I loved this “Laughing as we dropped pebbles
That disturbed the still surface Of the dark water below.”
Really nice images.
Aaww! Disturbance that ‘rocked’ & broke the happy, peaceful still within, that nothing could have bridged then. Very sweet..(i chose to overlook the hurt & let myself get overwhelmed by the love that painted this poem..)
Teenage love is so heart-breaking..
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Oh what a moment, I could feel it all……..your poetry is always so beautifully strung, so emotive. Very, very well done.
Loved the broken rock imagery–and first camp love–you never forget–can’t believe I’m hoping the rock was left by accident or to symbolize something
TGR, your poems are limpid, just like the stunning photo. Both the poem and the picture ask me to dive into them. Well done!
Beautiful in its pain. I’ll remember this one.
Your poetry is fabulous, your photos stunning, what can I say? You’re seriously talented. I so enjoyed looking around your blog.
beautifully written… so many pieces of pebbles
Dropping rocks into the water. That takes me back to being a kid and something simpler.
Beautiful writing. Heartbreaking ending.
I was able to ride this to the end.