The first weekend of their friendship she
complained that her new ring was loose
on her right hand and that it really fit better
on the ring finger of her left but everyone
knew you only wore engagement rings there.
No problem, he said, as he slid it on her finger,
I’ll engage you. But don’t take it off or the
engagement’s broken. And she didn’t care
that it was all in jest – she kept that ring on
for months, even when she slept, even in the
shower, even though it turned her finger green.
One night during the winter camping trip they
snuck out after it was dark and walked in circles
around the campsite for an hour, two, the fresh
snow crunching under their feet as they lifted
their faces to the skies, sharing the names of
constellations they knew and inventing others.
He could tell that she was feeling sad -
everything was ending, graduation just a
few months away, and after that, who knew?
But they had tonight, and as they walked he
told her a fable about the sun that still shines,
even on the darkest days, there behind the clouds,
and as they made their way through the silent forest
he held her hand in his, an unexpected sweetness.
In later years she thought of him sometimes.
They never even kissed, you know.
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(Three Word Wednesday prompt: care, unexpected, weekend)


And I love your last two lines……..I got a little lump in my throat (yeah, I know I’m a sap). A great write, as usual.
Oh my, so sweet. I think my heart broke a little on the last line.
I like the picture I have in my head of her sitting over her morning coffee, in her housecoat, kids all gone clattering off to school, husband snatching kisses and toast in one go and her in a dust motey silence thinking about what was and might have been.
My favourite bit:
she kept that ring on
for months, even when she slept, even in the
shower, even though it turned her finger green
Loved the last two sentences also. The post was so poignant
Lovely story. The innocence of young intense like.
Really enjoyed this.
“he told her a fable about the sun that still shines,
even on the darkest days, there behind the clouds”
I know that fable – and that sun is still shining
this was a wonderfully tender post
sometimes i long for the innocence of this kind of a memory…
Very genuinely sweet, untainted.
Very nice.
~S
Wot they all said
The last para sends the camera panning way back way fast, it all becomes small and long ago and very poignant.
So sweet and tender and teary. I love it.
Sigh.
(And yes, that’s a good/melancholy/happy/sad at the same time sigh.)
This was beautiful It brings up so many mixed feelings
I really liked the last to lines they make me wonder what could have been in my life
Wonderful!!! I loved reading this. And the ending just made it even more perfect somehow.
Reminded me of a silly pact I made with a girl one time. We promised if neither of us were married in five years that we’d marry each other.
Made me smile to think about that. Thank you.
Lovely! So romantic.
Very sweet. I love the image of the two of them out there in the snow together. They never even kissed! Very innocent and fresh.
wow. I absolutely loved this. great job.
I enjoyed the innocence portrayed here but, I have to say I was hoping, at least, that they would get to kiss. Very good use of the three words this week. Keep up the good work. Have a nice day.
Michelle
I think we can all identify with memories like this.
Sweet memory, and tender evocation. Got me thinking about young love, but nothing so innocent in my past. Well done.